Wednesday, April 1, 2009
Petruchio #12
Ya you know I already am really great but now I get to show and be handsome,masculant, and amazing even thoough I already am.#12!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its pretty sweet I get to be all stuck up. You see my father antonio is dead and now, I'm looking for a wife thats loaded with cash. Oh my gosh this girl is biggest meanie I've ever met. As long as I get the cash its cool with me. I'm actually starting to doubt my own words. If I live I'll be lucky ,this calls for her to be killed with kindness!
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Great first post! Watch out for run-on sentences in your writing. Read back through your paragraph and add in punctuation marks where they are needed.
I like that you use a fun voice in your writing. Good job.
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